IELTS Writing 2020 : Governmental policies
In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research.
Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Sample Answer:
Nowadays, most scientific studies are financed and carried out by private enterprises instead of the governing bodies. In my opinion, the benefits of this are greater than its drawbacks.
On the one hand, that research is paid and conducted by private companies can be greatly beneficial. In fact, unlike governmental organizations, most companies’ primary objectives are profits, so their motivation to minimize the costs arising upon research activities is much more considerable. Therefore, they tend to prevent their scientists and other workers more strictly from wasting any resources, including time and money; as a result, their outcomes can be quicker and more money-efficient. In addition, when the government leaves scientific research for businesses, the financial pressure on the national budget can be partly relieved. Instead, it can be allocated for investing in other important sectors such as education or transportation.
On the other hand, I believe that letting private businesses sponsor or undertake such studies will bring about more significant disadvantages. First, there are very few private companies that are willing to do unpaid work while shouldering a huge financial burden at the same time. Consequently, they may require the public to pay to access or share their research results, so that they can afford to cover their expenses as well as to ensure their personal incomes. Second, when allowing companies to do scientific research, the authorities can hardly make sure the entire research process is under supervision. It is possible that companies with the top priority being maximizing profits will sell their research to other organizations, such as terrorists or criminals, who take advantage of such research to harm society.
In conclusion, I claim that private investment in and conduct of scientific research may result in several advantages which are, however, outweighed by the undesirable consequences.
