IELTS Writing Band 8 : Transport

Topic:

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems.

To what extend do you agree?

Band 8 Sample

It is argued that money should be spent on developing roads and motorways rather than on public transport systems. Personally I think both road and public transport systems have vital roles to play in modern society, and therefore should be equally invested in.

On the one hand, better road quality increases the level of safety and reduces traffic congestion. In many cities and provinces in Vietnam for example, the number of road accidents is ever-increasing due to the condition of the road’s surface. This is clear evidence that the government should spend money improving the quality of road systems in order to ensure the safety of people. Additionally, building wider roads and more motorways in big cities like Ho Chi Minh, where traffic congestion is still a major problem, will help to increase the space for a larger number of vehicles, hence reducing pressure on the city’s main roads as well as congestion.

On the other hand, better public transport systems are beneficial for the environment and people who do not have a private vehicle. In fact, some modes of public transport like subways produce less pollutants than cars and other private vehicles. Therefore, spending money providing people with access to public transport will improve air quality and reduce pollution. Furthermore, for those who do not have a private vehicle, such as a motorbike or car, buses and subways are a great choice if they have to commute daily.

In conclusion, for the reasons above, I believe money would be well-spent on not only roads but also public transport systems.

 

Vocabulary highlights:

  1. Ensure the safety of people:
  2. Pressure on the city’s main roads
  3. Providing people with access to public transport
  4. Commute daily
  5. Well-spent

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