IELTS Writing Task 1
The plans show how a coastal land has developed into a coastal park
Sample Band 7
The maps describe the transformation of a coastal land into a park.
Overall, the land in front of the cliff has been upgraded with several facilities for park, while the beach behind now has easier access.
Before development, there were farm buildings on the side road, in the centre of the coastal land. To the left of these constructions were unused land and sea animals’ shelters, whereas the other side was agricultural land. This area faced the cliff, right in front of the beach and sea.
The place has been converted into a park, and located on the side road at present is a car park. A footpath was built from the west to the east, surrounding a new lake on the west and woods on the east. Trees were grown along the path to provide more shade, and a new coffee shop was installed behind the car park. The cliff in the front now has steps to allow more visitors to the beach.
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