The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations.
Model Answer 1:
The bar chart illustrates how five organizations invested money into four different aspects of the company, including machinery, building, staff training, and research.
Overall, organization B invested the most money in all aspects of its business, while organisation D invested the least.
Organisation B spent the biggest proportion of their investment on construction, at approximately €1.7 billion, while organisations A, C, D, and E only invested around €0.5 million each. The second biggest investment of organisation B was in research, at approximately €1.6 billion, which was double the investment of organisation A in the same aspect. Organisation C invested approximately €0.7 billion in research, while organisations D and E both invested around €0.3 billion.
Staff training was the third biggest investment of organisation B, at €1.5 billion, however it was the biggest investment of organisation A at €1 billion. Meanwhile, organisations C, D, and E all invested approximately €0.4 billion. Machinery was the smallest investment of organisation B, at €1.3 billion, but the biggest investment of organisation C, at €0.7 billion. Organisation A invested €0.8 billion in machinery, while organisations D and E only invested half of that amount.
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Sample Answer 2:
The chart shows the allocation of 5 organisations’ investment in four categories, including machinery, building, staff training and research. Overall, the priority of investments is different in each organisation. In addition, organisation B invests more heavily than others while the investment of organisation D and E is the lowest.
When it comes to machinery, each organisation invests from 0.8 to 1 billion euros in this sector, with the exception of organisation C in which the investment is just higher, at 1.3 billion. With regard to building, organisation A and B spend around 1.4 billion on building while 3 others spend an exact amount of money at 1 billion euros.
In terms of staff training and research, organisation B is the largest investor with 1.9 and 1.6 billion of spending respectively. Organisation A is the second largest investor in staff training as they spend 1.2 billion for this sector while the investment of organisation C in research is the second highest at 1.3 billion. In contrast, organisation D and E spend under 1 billion for each of these categories.
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