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Writing Task 1: The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1973, and the prices of black and white Television and colored Television during the same period.

The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1973, and the prices of black and white Television and colored Television during the same period.

Sample Answer 1:

The line chart illustrates the average monthly income of Japanese people and the cost of black and white, and color TVs over a 30-year period.

Overall, while the average salary witnessed an upward trend over time, the opposite was true for the price of both types of televisions. In addition, for most of the period, the price of a television was higher than the average monthly salary of people in Japan.

In 1953, a black and white television cost around 110,000  Yen. Ten years later, the cost saw a sharp decline and then continued to drop gradually to about 20,000 Yen by 1983. The price of color TVs followed a similar pattern, costing about 100,000 Yen when first appearing, and then significantly declining over the following years to just under 50,000 Yen by the end of the period.

Meanwhile, the average Japanese monthly salary at the start of the period (20,000 Yen) was significantly lower than the prices of a black and white television (110,000 Yen). The figure grew gradually from 1953 to 1973, when it overtook the price of black and white televisions, before soaring to nearly 70,000 Yen in 1983.

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Sample Answer 2:

The line graph shows data on the changes in the monthly income of Japanese people and the prices of two types of television during the thirty-year period from 1953 to 1983.

In general, the amount of money they earned increased considerably, whereas the price of television followed the opposite trend. In addition, color televisions cost much more than black and white ones. 

In 1953, the income of the Japanese was just below 20 thousand yen per month. Meanwhile, the price for black and white television was 110 thousand yen, which was  approximately five times as high as the average salary. However, after a decade, there was a steady growth of around 5 thousand yen in how much money they earned, while the amount they paid for television saw a plunge to 40 thousand yen. Also in this year, color television started to be sold in Japan at 100 thousand yen. 

The prices of the two types of television became much more affordable during the rest of the period. The cost of color television plummeted to nearly 55 thousand yen, compared to about 25 thousand yen of black and white models. The figures continued to drop gradually to just under 50 thousand yen and 20 thousand yen respectively in 1983. The monthly salary, on the other hand, witnessed a substantial rise to 30 thousand yen and overtook the cost of black and white TVs in 1973. After that, it soared to around 65 thousand yen in 1983. 

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